First Page Giveaway


To celebrate the grand opening of my website, I’ve decided to do a first page giveaway. That’s right, FREE! No stamps required. But there’s a catch. (Yes, there always is, and why should I be any different).

The first 25 lucky souls who spread the word about my website wins the golden ticket: I’ll critique your first page. Could be a query letter, synopsis, outline, screenplay, picture book, middle grade, young adult, adult, new adult, old adult, porn, Amazon wish list, last will and testament, you name it.

Leave a comment below, show me what you did in gory detail, I’ll approve, and when I do, voila! Once I give you the all clear, you can send the material to pjmacwriter @

So get your fingers clacking far and wide,  by carrier pigeon, tweet, or Facebook share,  let the world know that PJ McIlvaine is open for just about anything.



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  2. Catherine Friess · November 17, 2018

    Congratulations on your new website!
    My carrier pigeon is sleeping so I’ve tweeted for you instead –


  3. · November 17, 2018

    Thanks for offering this opportunity! I shared your post on my Twitter page.


  4. Rebecca Thill (@rkthill) · November 17, 2018

    Ack! Forgot to include this in my earlier reply


  5. PJ McIlvaine · November 17, 2018

    Thanks Rebecca!


  6. llkoch2014 · November 17, 2018

    Congratulations on your website. Shared on Twitter @llkoch1222


  7. Diana Lynn Gibson · November 17, 2018

    Super Congrats! I LOVE the dragon! Sharing on Twitter!


  8. PJ McIlvaine · November 17, 2018

    Everyone loves dragons! Thanks for sharing!!


  9. Lydia Lukidis · November 17, 2018

    Looks great!!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. PJ McIlvaine · November 17, 2018

    Thank you so much my friend!!!


  11. Alex Fallon · November 17, 2018

    Congrats!! I tweeted about your new website here:

    Hope you’re having a great day!


  12. roimata · November 17, 2018

    I tweeted abut your site too! Would LOVE to get a page critique!


  13. PJ McIlvaine · November 17, 2018

    Cool you got it!! Thanks for tweeting!


    • roimata · November 18, 2018

      Thanks so much! Will email you now.


  14. Meghan Mountain · November 18, 2018

    Very cool! I retweeted 🤗 I’m new to all this, would love some feedback/help! @meghanmountain


  15. PJ McIlvaine · November 18, 2018

    Thank you Meghan!!


  16. candicemarleyconner · November 19, 2018

    Woot-woot! I sent out the smoke signals (because dragons, right?) and a tweet (tagged you in it!) Congrats on your blog 🎉


  17. rupalimulge · November 19, 2018

    Oh lookie, your website is here and it does look awesome. I have tweeted it too !! I’m at @speakfortheself 🙂


  18. agatharodi · November 19, 2018

    Thank you!Congrats to you!That’s fantastic!


  19. Terri Rowe · November 26, 2018

    Shared on Twitter. 🙂 @TerrRowe Congratulations on your site–it is fabulous!


    • PJ McIlvaine · November 26, 2018

      Thank you so much. The feedback has been overwhelmingly positive.


  20. Lauren · November 26, 2018

    Love the dragon! This website is looking good!


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